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More from the series WW1 A to Z. Key Stage 2 Pupils could freeze the frame to view details of one of the diary entries shown. To be able to post, you will need to be a member of our free Writing Lesson of the Month Network.
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What can they discover about the life of the man who wrote the diary? Would they have eaten the same things, done the same things, seen the same people? School pupils examine diaries written during the war years and discuss what we can learn from them.